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THE BOTTLE
DEMON UNLEASHED IN OLD MEXICO
(F,S, 1237 words)
Bob Brown

Pablo’s talk, talk, talk, has rumbled in my head like a mountain stream for the last three days. It will take more days of siesta in a dark corner of my leather shop for his rumbles to subside from my head. I’m sure Pablo has never had a thought that didn’t burst out to cast a shadow on a sunny day.

I knew little of Pablo when I asked his Madre if he could go with me to Carrizo for supplies. I thought he was in his twenties, but she said he is 18. When I met him, his constant talking was worrisome, but I shrugged it off as nervousness over his good fortune of getting a job. I could travel alone, but two people can take turns sleeping on the trail. Bandits aren’t as apt to bother a camp when one person is awake. One day to Carrizo, one day to load my cart, and one day back to Rio Brayo. Pablo did tend my donkey. And in Carrizo he helped load supplies. For that I am thankful.

A good boy, yes. I cannot say he isn’t. And his Madre; she is a good woman. She does not rattle like shingles in the wind. She is quiet as a hot day. Maybe Pablo inherited all the words she has never said. Most of his prattle is about Maria, the love of his life. For three days it has been Maria this, Maria that. Oh, I’ve heard a thousand, thousand times, “My exquisite Maria, the love of my life.”

Ahhh, maybe the problem is mine, not his. Could it be, old man, that you squandered all your romance too many years ago? Was the throbbing of my young man’s heart so long ago I cannot remember the thrill? Perhaps. Perhaps that is it. But now we are only one hour from returning to Rio Brayo. I can endure one more hour. I must.

The next rise will bring us to Cemetery Hill. From there we can see Rio Brayo, our home—and rest—and if the saints preserve me for just a little longer—blessed silence.

“Look Señor. A fresh grave has been dug,” Pablo tells me.

“Must be for Carlos Bolivar. He is 91 and he was very sick when we left.”

“You are mistaken, Señor. Viejo Bolivar is tall and lanky like a rattler. This grave is not so long. Hombre Viejo Bolivar would not fit so good.”

“You don’t know, Pablo. Carlos is stooped now. It could be for him.”

“Lay down beside the grave and you will see, Señor. The grave is too short.”

“I won’t lay beside the grave.”

“Do it, Señor. That will prove I’m right.”

“I won’t lay in the dirt. Anyway, it will bring evil spirits to lay down beside a grave.”

“Ha, you are superstitious, old man. There is no such thing as evil spirits.”

How little respect Pablo has. I am not so old, I think. “Mark my words, Pablo. My Madre, God rest her soul, told of these things when I was a child. There are evil spirits in the air. I can feel them. A smart man will not take chances.”

“Ha, ha. You are weird in the head, hombre Viejo. I will show you.”

“Stay on the cart, Pablo. Don’t be foolish.”

“Look, I’m not afraid. I will lay beside the grave.”

“No, no, don’t lay down, Pablo. I fear for you.”

“Ha. See hombre Viejo. The grave is too short for me. And I am shorter than hombre Viejo Bolivar.”

“Please Pablo. Get up. There is evil in the air, I feel it. This makes no sense. I believe you. The grave is too small for Carlos Bolivar. Now get up.”

I wait while Pablo flaps his hat on his rear and the breeze carries away clouds of dust. As he climbs back in the cart, he says, “There is no such thing as evil spirits. If there are, bring them on, I, Pablo Gonzalez, will drive them away.”

“You talk foolish, Pablo.”

I whip my donkey; the cart creaks and my supplies rattle again. Boiling black clouds are congregating over Rio Brayo. Brooding shadows consume the small Mission and the cluster of humble adobe homes that surround it. We see Maria rush out in her desert yard to retrieve clothes from a clothesline.

Pablo waves and yells, “Maria! Maria! It is I, Pablo. Hombre Pablo Gonzalez.” but the wind makes great noise, and Maria, the love of his life, does not hear him.

This boy, he wearies me so.

Suddenly Pablo jumps down from the cart. “Look Señor, over by the prickly pear.”

Saints preserve. I see it too. A swirl of wind blows sand away from a half-buried bottle. “Don’t touch it Pablo. It will bring us harm. I can feel it. The wind is evil to blow so suddenly.” I cringe as Pablo digs the ancient brown bottle out of the sand with his bare hands. It has a weathered cork in it. A spirit’s cold hand prickles the back of my neck.

Pablo holds the bottle over his head and shakes it. “There is something in it, Señor. I will tell you what it is hombre Viejo. This bottle holds your evil spirits. Ha, ha.”

“I beg you, Pablo. Put the bottle down. Nothing is right. See the storm over our village? Hear the wind warning us. You are bringing bad things on us. My Madre knew of these things. Let us hurry from here.”

A glance toward Rio Brayo shivers my backbone. Huge black hands churn and hover over our homes, our village. Streaks of lightning flash between the hands. Evil fingers clutch downward. It is clear; harm is upon us. Furious dust swirls around Maria. She has an armful of clothes and the wind is whipping her skirt.

Strong wind is with us now and Pablo’s hat blows away. His hair bats angrily making his head look large. His shirt balloons and flaps in fright. “Ha, ha. Look, hombre Viejo,” his voice muffled by wind, “I’m going to pull the cork and let the evil spirits out. Ha, ha.”

“Don’t Pablo! Don’t! Oh GOD, forgive us!”

I try to look away, but fear clamps my head. In the side of my eyes I see Pablo’s young teeth flash as he bites the cork. He twists the bottle with his hands and the cork pops out. He spits it away like a mad man. His raspy voice screams above the wind, “See hombre Viejo. There are no evil spirits.” He turns the bottle down and laughs. His laughter is no longer the laughter of pleasure; it is the laughter of evil, the laughter of Demons. You see it in his face. Demons have possessed Pablo. Syrupy black stuff drools from the bottle.

BOOM! A murderous bolt of lightning stabs Rio Brayo. Furious wind and crushing rain follow—and—and Maria is sprawled face up under the clothesline.

Pablo screams, “No! No! Maria! Maria! My love! My exquisite Maria!” He throws the bottle recklessly and runs toward Rio Brayo—and the love of his life.

Oh, Pablo, Pablo. You unleashed el espíritu of death. You are so young, so foolish, so stubborn. You would not listen. I knew. I understood. Why didn’t you, Pablo? My Madre would not lie. And now—poor Maria. Her grave waits.

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