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BITTERSWEET REVENGE
RAYMOND AND CECIL'S QUEST FOR EASY MONEY LED TO DOUBLE TROUBLE RIGHT HERE IN RIVER CITY
(F,H,S, 1650 words, 8/01)
Bob Brown

 

“I wish there was some other way,” Cecil muttered.

“Yeah, me too.” Raymond dipped his head and rolled his eyes at Cecil in a kind of guilty way. “You ain’t scared, are ya Cecil?”

“No! No! Uh, well, maybe a little bit.”

 “It’s all right to be scared a little bit. I’m scared just a tiny bit. But that’s good, cause if you’re scared a tiny bit, you’ll be on your toes and won’t make no mistakes.” Raymond stood up from the concrete block and patted his shirt pocket to see if he’d overlooked any cigarette butts he could relight. There weren’t any. “Let’s go, old buddy. It ain’t gonna get no easier.”

“It’s the guns that I don’t like, Raymond. Couldn’t we just hide them under them weeds there. I doubt if mine’ll shoot anyhow.”

“We’ve been over all this. It’s gonna be alright, you’ll see. Guns’ll make um know that we mean business. We won’t have to shoot ‘em. Know what I mean?”

“Okay, okay, but wait a minute.” Cecil pulled off his right shoe and stretched a waxy sock to fold over a hole so it wouldn’t strangle his big toe. Then he rearranged a heavy cardboard over a ragged window in the sole.

Raymond watched with increasing impatience as a broken lace had to be threaded with painstaking precision so the knots would not compromise comfort. When Cecil untied his other shoe, Raymond could stand it no more. “Quit-ya-stallin’ Cecil. You can do that later.”

“There might be sit-u-ation whereby we’d have to run, Raymond.” He serviced his left footwear with the same diligence as he had with the right, in spite of the heat of Raymond’s irritation bearing down on his neck.

Raymond folded his arms and set his jaw as he scowled at Cecil. “Well gol-durn-it, hurry up, will ya?”

At last Cecil stood up and exhaled loudly, “Okay, let’s go.” He lifted his toboggan cap and ran knurly fingers through gray-streaked hair.

 

On a darkened sidewalk across the street from a neighborhood convenience store, Raymond and Cecil watched several cars come and leave the store.

Raymond said, “When that last car pulls out there won’t be nobody in there but the clerk. Get ready to move, Cecil.”

A faded blue bandanna streamed from Cecil’s pocket and he ignored the sour smell as he started to tie it over his face.

“What the hell you doing? That’s a dead give-away.”

“I don’t want him to recognize me, Raymond.”

“Damn! Alright, you’ll have to bust in fast before he has a chance to get to the phone or anything.” He fidgeted while Cecil tied the bandanna. “Don’t get it over your eyes, you won’t see where you’re going.”

“I can see.”

“No you can’t.

“I can see.”

“Gol-durn-it, your head’s harder’n a hickory nut.”

“I can see. I can see.”

“Okay, it’s like this. I’ll go in first and go to the back of the store like I’m gonna get some beer. Then you bust in and it’ll get his attention and the next thing that clerk knows, I’ll have my gun aimed straight down his nose. Then you can run behind the counter and empty all the bills out of the cash register. Got that?”

“So I won’t have to pull my gun then will I?”

“You just concentrate on collecting the money. You’ve got that grocery bag for the money, ain’t you?”

“Yeh, it’s in my pocket.”

“Lookie there,” Raymond whispers. “that last guy is leaving. I’ll saunter on over there. You wait about thirty seconds and follow me, okay?”

“Alright, Raymond.”

“You’re a sight, Cecil. You sure you can see?”

“I can see.”

Pulling up his britches seemed to give Raymond an extra shot of courage as he walked toward the store.

Cecil felt abandoned as though his last friend had just turned his back on him. A shudder rippled through his shoulders. It wasn’t because he was cold because his jacket was plenty heavy. Ten seconds felt like thirty to Cecil, so he started walking toward the store. His body jarred and he stomped three steps when he walked off the curb that he didn’t see. The jostle sparked a moment of panic and he’d have given anything if he could just turn around and run, but Raymond would never forgive him for that.

He paused at the door. He could see through the window. Raymond was crouched behind a bread rack and was waving frantically for him to come on in. The door felt so heavy that Cecil thought it might be a final warning not to go in at all. His hand lay on the door bar for one full second. After a deep breath, he pushed against unseen forces to go inside.

The young blond-headed clerk saw Cecil with his toboggan cap pulled down almost to the faded bandanna and froze like a stone statue. His eyes bulged like a walleye’s and that seemed to hypnotize Cecil. Raymond’s elevated voice finally sunk into Cecil’s consciousness and he looked in that direction.

Raymond was waving his gun all over the place, but it was mostly in the general direction of the clerk. “Don’t you move one muscle, buddy. I got ya covered,” Raymond screamed. The clerk couldn’t have moved a muscle if God had commanded him to. “Get around here Ce…, er, er, Joe, and fill that bag.” Raymond commanded.

Cecil didn’t move. Maybe waiting on Joe to take his place, whoever Joe was. He leaned his head forward as though deeply engrossed in watching a movie.

“Ce…, er Joe! Get your ass around here and fill that bag.”

Cecil’s dark eyes, buried in a slit between a toboggan and a bandana, studied Raymond for a second before he suddenly sprang into action. He dug in his pocket for the grocery bag as he passed Raymond. As fate would have it, the gun was on top of the bag and Cecil fumbled to get it un-hung from his pocket. The gun fired with a muffled pop sound.

“Owwoo! Cecil, you idiot, you shot me in the leg.”

“No I didn’t.”

“You did too, you dumb ass. See the blood?” Raymond doubled over holding his left leg.

“I don’t see any blood.”

“Take off that damned bandana and you’ll see it.”

Cecil pulled the bandana down a bit. “Well I’ll be. I did shoot you, didn’t I?” Both men forgot about the clerk but it wouldn’t matter. He was petrified and would later become the sorriest witness in the history of Knox County. Cecil said with great sincerity, “I’m sorry, Raymond.”

“Sorry don’t cut it, Cecil.”

“Well, I know how you feel.”

“It’s my leg, you can’t know how I feel.”

“I do too know how you feel.”

“Okay, this is how it feels.” Raymond took deliberate aim and shot Cecil in the leg.

“Oh, oh, oh!”

“Now you know how it feels.”

Cecil’s voice was high pitched. “Raymond you didn’t hav’ta to do that.” His pants’ leg turned red at once.

“Come on Cecil, you done ruined all my plans. Let’s get out of here.” Raymond turned to the clerk and said, “Don’t you tell nobody about this, if you know what’s good for you.”

The two men hobbled out of the store and hop scotched across the parking area. A lot of “Oh, oh’s,” mingled with other descriptive language painfully faded away as they hopped and limped down the darkened sidewalk.

After about a block all they have breath for is huffing and puffing. Cecil slowed down and then stopped, “I can’t go no further, Raymond.”

“You gotta. Just one more block and we’ll hide under Jessup’s loading dock.”

Cecil took a few more steps and dropped to his knees. “I can’t go no further Raymond.”

Raymond’s expression revealed his shock when he looked at Cecil. Even in the darkness he could tell that all was not well. “God, Cecil, your white as a sheet.” He drug Cecil around behind a hedgerow. In the dim light he could see that Cecil’s injured leg had marked a red-black trail on the ground. The wound pulsated with each heartbeat. Raymond ripped off his belt.

Cecil gasped for breath, but otherwise seemed calm, “Raymond, you always admired this jacket I got at the Good Will Store. I want you to have it.”

“Cut that talk out, Cecil. You ain’t going nowhere.” Raymond threw the belt around Cecil’s leg and pulled it very tight.

“It’s about all I got to give away and I want you to have it. My billfold is falling apart, but in it you’ll find a two-dollar bill. I’ve been saving it for good luck. You can have that too.”

Raymond’s eyes were glassy, “Come on Cecil. Stop talking like that. You gotta. You’re the only real friend I got.”

“I’m so tired, Raymond. I don’t much care if I make it or not. You’ll make new friends, you always do.”

Raymond held the belt and watched the wound. “It’s slowing down, Cecil.” There was a touch of excitement in his voice.

Cecil’s head relaxed to one side. A faint, “I’m sorry, Raymond.” preceded total limpness.

“Come on, Cecil, stay with me, buddy.” Cecil’s eyes were wide but lacked understanding. Raymond put his arm under Cecil’s head and watched intently as Cecil’s chest collapsed in a long exhale. Raymond’s heart raced while he waited for Cecil’s next breath. He swallowed hard and whimpered, “Ce-cil?”

 

The Knoxville News-Sentinel had a small article on page five the next day. It stated that two men, whose names were withheld, shot each other in the leg in a Quick-Check for unexplained reasons. Both men were found huddled together about a block from the Quick-Check. One man is in satisfactory condition and under guard at UT Hospital. The second man was dead when the police arrived, supposedly from shock and loss of blood.

 

CECIL

How’s a man to leave a mark in this world?
With goals and dreams so hard to hold.

There’s a way I’m told.

When flesh and bones have blown away,
A heart of gold will sparkle and stay.

 

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