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THE LAST MILE
Trail to top of the mountain and the end of the day
(F,S, 572 words)
Bob Brown

 

        Carlos and Pedro, his venerable mount, inched their way up the grueling eastern slope of San Madero Mountain. A cool early morning breeze had been pleasant, but by noon hot arid air had squeezed out all that had been comfortable for the rest of the day. Carlos stopped often to let Pedro rest. He gave his silent companion a reassuring pat on the neck. “Have heart, old friend, the crest is not far now.”
       
The last mile to the crest bore down like an oppressive weight. Pedro would pause, expand his chest for fresh air, then trudge on. Carlos understood the pauses and did not try to prod him on. “Only a short way now, Pedro. You can make it.”
        Pedro began bobbing his head up and down, a sign of weariness, so Carlos dismounted and walked beside him. “How many trails have we walked together, Pedro. Too many maybe, I’m old and tired and so are you.”
        No talking now, Carlos was blowing with Pedro. All movement of air had ceased; the dust-coated scrub pines beside the worn path were bent low, praying for water. Carlos stopped, arched his shoulders back, whistled softly, and pulled out a wrinkled bandanna that had been red in some earlier time. Pedro watched with big brown eyes as Carlos pulled his battered hat from tousled hair, wiped the brim, soaked sweat off his brow, and crammed the juicy bandanna back into his pocket. Slapping the helpless hat on his leg aroused powdery dust that drifted downward. Stubby sun fried fingers swiped dirty lather off Pedro’s neck and he slung it on the trail creating tiny dust plumes beside his disconsolate boots. He drug his slimy hand across bedraggled britches as they shuffled on up the trail. Even steeper now it seemed, heavy feet were too tired to go on and too close to stop.
        At last the crest. A refreshing breeze struck them in the face, their reward for reaching the top. Carlos led Pedro through some brush and around a few contorted pines. An emerald valley lay below, with far away mountains painted white. Carlos sucked in as much cool air as his lungs could hold and claimed possession of it until forced to exhale noisily. With an arm draped over Pedro’s neck, he said, “This must be the top of the world, old friend. There cannot be a more beautiful place than this.”
   
     Pedro’s head was low, but he appeared to be looking at the view also.
        Carlos, scrabbled in a limp saddle bag and pulled out a bruised apple. He offered it to Pedro, a habit so old its beginnings were lost. Pedro did not bite it eagerly as he usually did. Carlos tried to nudge the apple into Pedro’s mouth but he just looked at Carlos with those big brown eyes
¾then his legs buckled, and he began to collapse. The apple bounced down the rocky slope. Carlos frantically threw his arms around Pedro’s neck and tried to hold him up. “No, no, Pedro. No!” For a fleeting moment Carlos felt his reluctance to accept the inevitable would make a difference, but Pedro’s overwhelming weight forced them to the ground in tight embrace.
        Carlos sat on the ground for a long time solemnly watching the sun splash the western sky with streaks of copper and gold, finally fading to a faint glow. His callused hand rested on Pedro’s neck¾it was still warm.

 

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